Shot by shot remake comparison with original version

I would say our breakfast club remake went pretty well overall. We were able to imitate the types of shots used and what the shots were of easily. We used titles at the beginning of our remake just like in the original version and had shots of the school with the voiceover as non-diagetic sound. We were able to imitate exactly what was said in the voiceover as we found the script online. We then showed the teens arriving to school and were able to remake the scenes with dialogue. Although all of this went well, there were a few mistakes made. For instance we forgot to add the company ident at the beginning of our remake. There should have been the universal logo at the beginning. Apart from this the only other improvements that could of been made, were to improve the quality of our remake by making the cuts more precise in editing and raising the volume of the sound. 

Overall i would say i'm pretty happy with the outcome though!