Feedback
Quite good. Some detailed analysis and thoughtful blogging, just a few improvements would help to increase your mark considerably.
- Titles should identify what is in the blog post
-Don't leave posts unfinished. There are lots of posts with unfinished in the title at the moment. Also blog consistently with no big gaps.
- Presentation needs a bit of jazzing up. There are some nicely detailed text only posts which you could (in future) use ICT to present in a more visually interesting way, incorporating multimedia too. Also consider using a Blogger design template.
- Post extra and individual posts not on the checklist.
Improvements
After getting my feedback I made the following changes:-
I changed all of the titles in my Blog posts making them more precise to enable people to move around the blog as easily as possible.
I am the biggest critic of my own work, it was hard for me to take the step of pressing 'publish post' instead of save, but I finally took the plunge and started publishing posts. to make sure my Blog posts were more consistent.
When I wasn't happy with a post I would publish them with UNFINISHED in the title which definitely isn't good as this is a professional blog with real viewers. I have started working on my time management, any unfinished posts will stay as drafts for a maximum of two days instead of a week and no more 'UNFINISHED' posts will be posted
I've began looking at new websites for multimedia such as GOanimme and storyboard and I've finally got out of my final cut pro comfort zone and started using Camtasia and other editing software.
The biggest change i made is the visual outcome of the blog. I gave it some TLC, I created a banner, changed the background colours, played around with the layout ,font and added music.
I've been creating a good balance between group, check-list tasks and additional posts for my individual posts.
Overall I think my feedback was just talking about finding a balance and I'm working on that and improving the quality of the blog along the way!!
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